Merge pull request #960 from bhrutledge/copy-edit-testpypi

Copy-edit TestPyPI guide

Author: webknjaz

source/guides/using-testpypi.rst

@@ -13,18 +13,18 @@ Registering your account
 ------------------------
 
 Because TestPyPI has a separate database from the live PyPI, you'll need a
-separate user account for specifically for TestPyPI. Go to
+separate user account specifically for TestPyPI. Go to
 https://test.pypi.org/account/register/ to register your account.
 
-.. Note:: The database for TestPyPI may be periodically pruned, so it is not
+.. note:: The database for TestPyPI may be periodically pruned, so it is not
     unusual for user accounts to be deleted.
 
 
 Using TestPyPI with Twine
 -------------------------
 
 You can upload your distributions to TestPyPI using :ref:`twine` by specifying
-the ``--repository`` flag
+the ``--repository`` flag:
 
 .. code-block:: bash
 
@@ -38,8 +38,8 @@ your project to appear on the site.
 Using TestPyPI with pip
 -----------------------
 
-You can tell pip to download packages from TestPyPI instead of PyPI by
-specifying the ``--index-url`` flag
+You can tell :ref:`pip` to download packages from TestPyPI instead of PyPI by
+specifying the ``--index-url`` flag:
 
 .. tab:: Unix/macOS
 
@@ -53,21 +53,21 @@ specifying the ``--index-url`` flag
 
         py -m pip install --index-url https://test.pypi.org/simple/ your-package
 
-If you want to allow pip to also pull other packages from PyPI you can
+If you want to allow pip to also download packages from PyPI, you can
 specify ``--extra-index-url`` to point to PyPI. This is useful when the package
 you're testing has dependencies:
 
 .. tab:: Unix/macOS
 
     .. code-block:: bash
 
-        python3 -m pip install --index-url https://test.pypi.org/simple/ --extra-index-url https://pypi.org/simple your-package
+        python3 -m pip install --index-url https://test.pypi.org/simple/ --extra-index-url https://pypi.org/simple/ your-package
 
 .. tab:: Windows
 
     .. code-block:: bat
 
-        py -m pip install --index-url https://test.pypi.org/simple/ --extra-index-url https://pypi.org/simple your-package
+        py -m pip install --index-url https://test.pypi.org/simple/ --extra-index-url https://pypi.org/simple/ your-package
 
 Setting up TestPyPI in :file:`.pypirc`
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