feedback update

Author: kjbranch

region/maridia/inner-yellow/Northwest Maridia Bug Room.json

@@ -523,7 +523,6 @@
       "requires": [
         "SpaceJump",
         {"or": [
-          "canCarefulJump",
           "h_canUsePowerBombs",
           "ScrewAttack",
           "Plasma",
@@ -532,15 +531,23 @@
             "Wave",
             "Spazer"
           ]},
+          {"and": [
+            "canDodgeWhileShooting",
+            {"enemyDamage": {
+              "enemy": "Menu",
+              "type": "contact",
+              "hits": 1
+            }}
+          ]},
           {"enemyDamage": {
             "enemy": "Menu",
             "type": "contact",
-            "hits": 2
+            "hits": 4
           }}
         ]}
       ],
-      "note": "Quickly Space Jump up while waiting to lure the Menus as long as possible.",
-      "devNote": "Getting hit by a Menu will cause Samus to fall and likely get hit again."
+      "note": "Kill the Menus and Space Jump up.",
+      "devNote": "With Space Jump alone with low tech, tanking the damage is not likely going to work."
     },
     {
       "id": 23,
@@ -549,7 +556,6 @@
       "requires": [
         "HiJump",
         {"or": [
-          "canCarefulJump",
           "h_canUsePowerBombs",
           "ScrewAttack",
           "Plasma",
@@ -571,8 +577,11 @@
           "canWalljump"
         ]}
       ],
-      "note": "Spin jump directly from the safety to the right up to the ledge.",
-      "devNote": "Without knowing how to jump up directly, Samus will need to kill or tank the Menus."
+      "note": [
+        "Kill or tank the Menus or spin jump directly from the safety to the right up to the ledge.",
+        "With a spin jump, Samus can make it to the ledge without a wall jump or other means."
+      ],
+      "devNote": "The safe direct jump is not expected here and is included in another srat, but it is still worth mentioning here."
     },
     {
       "link": [3, 1],
@@ -583,6 +592,24 @@
       ],
       "note": "Use the full runway to jump up to the higher ledge."
     },
+    {
+      "id": 24,
+      "link": [3, 1],
+      "name": "Jump From Safety, Menu Avoid",
+      "requires": [
+        "canDodgeWhileShooting",
+        {"or": [
+          "SpaceJump",
+          "HiJump"
+        ]}
+      ],
+      "note": [
+        "From the safe ledge on the lower right, jump directly to the top ledge without getting hit by the Menus.",
+        "With HiJump, a spin jump can get Samus onto the ledge.",
+        "With Space Jump, perform one jump without luring the Menus, then a second to get onto the ledge."
+      ],
+      "devNote": "canDodgeWhileShooting isn't optimal here, but it is a similar difficulty of dodging."
+    },
     {
       "id": 24,
       "link": [3, 1],
@@ -591,7 +618,7 @@
         "canTrickyJump",
         {"or": [
           "canPreciseWalljump",
-          "canSpringBallJumpMidAir"
+          "canTrickySpringBallJump"
         ]}
       ]
     },