feedback updates

Author: blkerby

region/norfair/west/Crumble Shaft.json

@@ -214,14 +214,30 @@
       "link": [1, 2],
       "name": "Base",
       "requires": [
-        {"simpleHeatFrames": 150},
-        {"or": [
-          {"and": [
-            "canMoonfall",
-            {"heatFrames": 20}
-          ]},
-          {"heatFrames": 45}
-        ]}
+        {"simpleHeatFrames": 120},
+        {"heatFrames": 75}
+      ],
+      "note": [
+        "Falling down the right side of the room is safe."
+      ]
+    },
+    {
+      "id": 3,
+      "link": [1, 2],
+      "name": "Moonfall",
+      "requires": [
+        "canMoonfall",
+        "canTrickyJump",
+        {"simpleHeatFrames": 100},
+        {"heatFrames": 60}
+      ],
+      "note": [
+        "Move forward far enough to trigger the crumble block, then quickly moonfall before it respawns.",
+        "It can help to perform the moonfall facing left (backing up to the right),",
+        "then quickly turn back left to clear the platform.",
+        "Press against the wall, aim down, and shoot open the door while falling.",
+        "It is possible to delay the moonfall enough to land on the doorframe,",
+        "by turning around back and forth once mid-air."
       ]
     },
     {
@@ -425,7 +441,10 @@
           {"heatFrames": 300}
         ]}
       ],
-      "note": "Walljump up the right, then walljump off the top-middle crumble platform then off the top-right one."
+      "note": [
+        "Enter with a spin jump, and wall jump up the right side;",
+        "at the end, walljump off the top-middle crumble platform then off the top-right one."
+      ]
     },
     {
       "id": 13,
@@ -434,19 +453,21 @@
       "requires": [
         "canCrumbleJump",
         "canTrickyJump",
+        "canTrickyDodgeEnemies",
         {"or": [
           {"and": [
             "HiJump",
-            "canTrickyDodgeEnemies",
+            "canInsaneJump",
             {"heatFrames": 370}
           ]},
-          {"heatFrames": 660}
+          {"heatFrames": 630}
         ]}
       ],
       "wallJumpAvoid": true,
       "note": [
         "Do 9 successive crumble jumps up the platforms.",
-        "If Hi-Jump is available, then it is possible to skip 4 of the crumble platforms."
+        "If Hi-Jump is available, then it is possible to skip 4 of the crumble platforms, using only the center platforms,",
+        "in which case it is recommended to down-grab the 3rd center platform, though doing a crumble spin jump onto it is also an option."
       ]
     },
     {