feedback

Author: dragonsinth

region/lowernorfair/east/Red Kihunter Shaft.json

@@ -1102,7 +1102,7 @@
       "blueSuitChecked": true,
       "note": [
         "Immediately move left to the end of the runway to prevent the Kihunter from descending.",
-        "The Kihunter can be safely killed without Wave by firing shots up through the edge of the platform.",
+        "The Kihunter can be safely killed without Wave by firing shots up through the edge of the platform."
       ]
     },
     {
@@ -2057,8 +2057,8 @@
       "flashSuitChecked": true,
       "blueSuitChecked": true,
       "note": [
-        "If the top Kihunter descends, this can be faster, since some shots will hit both enemies.",
-        "If it does not descend, the top Kihunter can be safely killed without Wave by firing shots up through the edge of the upper platform."
+        "The top Kihunter can be safely killed without Wave by firing shots up through the edge of the upper platform.",
+        "It's faster if the top Kihunter descends, because some shots will hit both enemies."
       ]
     },
     {