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Co-authored-by: Michael McKenzie <mikemck101@gmail.com>

Author: kjbranch

region/tourian/main/Tourian Escape Room 4.json

@@ -442,8 +442,7 @@
       "note": [
         "Spring Ball bomb jump up to the top, then exit G-mode and fall to the bottom.",
         "It is recommended to stay near the right wall with the camera positioned so that the left wall pirates are off camera.",
-        "Avoid touching any of the pirates' stationary, invisible lasers, which they place when they jump to the opposite wall.",
-        "Note that there is a path up to the right that doesn't need wall jumps, but a crouch jump down grab is needed to get to the final platform."
+        "Avoid touching any of the pirates' stationary, invisible lasers, which they place when they jump to the opposite wall."
       ],
       "devNote": "FIXME: This is likely possible with just Bombs, but seems very difficult, a diagonal bomb jump around th overhangs might make it feasible."
     },

region/tourian/main/Tourian Hopper Room.json

@@ -175,7 +175,7 @@
       "bypassesDoorShell": "free",
       "flashSuitChecked": true,
       "note": "Immediately on entry Spring Ball Bomb Jump. Be sure not to land left of the pillar below the door or it is harder to get up in time.",
-      "devNote": "FIXME: This it possible with Bombs by luring the hoppers to the left, but it is dependent on hopper RNG."
+      "devNote": "FIXME: This is possible with Bombs by luring the hoppers to the left, but it is dependent on hopper RNG."
     },
     {
       "id": 7,